Meh
I can tell you put a lot of work into this but it isn't that great
Nature and technology at odds, yawn, nothing creative there. Mostly simple animations. Very short. Mehh
Meh
I can tell you put a lot of work into this but it isn't that great
Nature and technology at odds, yawn, nothing creative there. Mostly simple animations. Very short. Mehh
Meh back at ya
Embarrassing
Terrible voice acting. Really bad art, especially of characters, although some of the landscapes are okay. Terrible story, awful dialogue. Embarrassing.
I think it's great, you should watch the series up to this point if you think the story is "terrible" its actually really interesting.
Embarassing tho? I'm proud of this, more for the story than the art though.
stuck
Gotta stop using those generic sound effects, instead of adding to the animation it is just distracting when you have heard those sound effects a million times before.
You also used the Ren & Stimpy esque gross close ups a little too often but overall it was not that bad and it was weird enough to be worth watching
I agree with ya on the sound effects. I'm just not sure where else to really find any or how to make my own without them sounding like shit
The close ups however I only used one for each character. In each scene when the character has the map close up. I wanted to have some kind of sequence occur that would cause a stylistic difference in how the characters appeared. Whenever that sequence happened, the characters would change accordingly. Kind of create a familiarity and comfortableness with it at some parts. I don't think I overused it.
SPACE POLICE
BLEEP BLOOP HERE COMES THE SPACE POLICE
Fuck tha police coming straight from the underground
Sprites. It had to be sprites.
None of the actual artwork is yours, and the story and dialogue feels like it was wirtten by a 12 year old. Good job putting a bunch of sprites together I guess
no shit sherlockkkk.
i take it you hate watching already designed characters being made into a fan flash?
dialogue by a 12 yr old? guess mission accomplished!
Cute
It was cute and a lot of the animations are really good. Its short but its good for what it is.
thanks, I'm pretty happy seeing as I only spent three days on it. :)
Not good
Really generic, boring Flash art, terrible voiceacting, a lot of annoying canned sound effects, not funny. Some of the animation is okay though.
Sorry you didn't like it
Age 34, Male
Joined on 5/20/09